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Edgar Allan Joe

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Confessions

    I'm sorry if this sounds mean, but the whole thing was very clishe. I think it could actually be good if you just put a more unique spin on it.

    Nov 8, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Why i Write

    I have just one quick suggestion. A broken winged bird that can't fly is redundant. I think you should shorten it to A broken winged bird

    Nov 8, 2009


[as a roleplayer is feeling sad about torturing her characters] GrandWild: "You're a writer, dear. Embrace it."
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